Carlos Rodriguez - Valkryie Pilot

[dante]

img482.imageshack.us/my.php?image=valkryie2gv.jpg - The Valkryie: Carlos Rodriguez's Flyer

Player’s Name: Dante

Name: Carlos Rodriguez

Race & Gender: Human, Male

Age: Early-Thirties

Height & Build: Tall, Athletic

Rank: Valkyrie Pilot

Physical Description: A vigorous appearance and fit. His face is pure and unblemished. He looks quite young then his actual age. Carlos wears the standard pilot’s uniform, which is masked by his Flak armor, a high-tensile padded fabric designed as a sleeveless jacket which covers the upper torso and a small portion of the lower parts of the body, as for headwear Carlos wears the Pilot Helmet a scientific enhanced helmet. The helmet has a Long Range Comm-Link, Targeting Mechanism which interacts with the Valkyries mechanism, and other equipment.

Mental Description: Considering his age, he is a very serious man, a man with an iron will. Carlos is intelligent, with a lot of experience in battle, of loss and glory. Certain memories haunt him, but he restrains his emotion and maintains his passive and somber appearance. He has a hard mentality, an individual that can't be discouraged easily.

Armor: Carlos wears the standard pilot’s uniform, which is masked by his Flak armor, a high-tensile padded fabric designed as a sleeveless jacket which covers the upper torso and a small portion of the lower parts of the body, as for headwear Carlos wears the Pilot Helmet a scientific enhanced helmet.

Career & Skills: Carlos enlisted to become a Fighter Pilot, he proved to be one of the best along with his squadron who called themselves “Hellstrike” due to their common use of the Hellstrike missiles , in many missions. Carlos has become an excellent flyer showing amazing skills with the Valkyrie.

Weapons: The bolt pistol is one of Carlos’s weapons which he has earned as a seasoned veteran. The standard bolt pistol is capable of housing between 6 and 10 rounds of ammunition, and has a barrel diameter of .75 caliber.

Equipments: A box of .75 caliber bullets and a Toolbox, which are stored in the Valkryies cargo hull.

Space Ship: Valkryie - can carry a squad of Troopers, armed with forward firing Multi-laser, two door mounted Heavy Bolters and two wing mounted Hellstrike missiles.

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[anaris]

'.75 calibre bullets' aren't officially what's fired from a bolt pistol, in case you didn't know. They're actually called bolt rounds. A bolter is what's technically termed a gyrojet - a propellant charge gives a shell a low velocity delivery from the barrel (which is how a human can, one-handed, fire a 20mm gun) and then the round contains a miniature rocket motor that ignites to speed the shell to its target. Then, once it hits, a mass-reactive sensor in the tip determines that its penetrated something and detonates a small explosive charge.

Of course, you may already know all this. I like to type. I should also query the ammo capacity, but that's because the last source I had for it was Chaos Gate, ages old, which had like twenty.

On a less fluff-related note, you completely neglected to describe anything about his personality, making this character a one-dimensional list of equipment.